Week 11 Storytelling: Rama

Rama, Sita, and Lakshmana roamed the lands of India after being exiled from King Dasharatha’s kingdom. They had just finished a quarrel in which they had to defeat the demons Khara, and Dooshana. Shurpanka, Khara and Dooshana’s cousin, had escaped from the battle and retreated to the Kingdom of Lanka where she hoped to receive aid from her brother Ravana.

Shurpanaka begged Ravana to defeat Rama and Lakshmana in battle after they had injured her in battle. At first he disagreed because he did not want to involve himself with his sister’s drama. Shurpanaka then told Ravana about Rama’s beautiful wife Sita. Ravana grew more interested and finally decided to help Shurpanaka get revenge on Rama and Lakshmana.

Ravana devised a plan in which he would attempt to steal Sita away from Rama. He tells his uncle Maricha about the situation, and Maricha decides to help him. Ravana’s plan was to have Maricha shape shift into a beautiful golden deer. Sita would be so in love with the deer that she would send Rama and Lakshmana after it. Ravana would then swoop in to steal Sita away.

A couple weeks passed and the plan was set in motion. Rama, Lakshmana, and Sita were all taking a rest from travel. They all sat down and ate some fruit that they picked off nearby trees. All of a sudden a beautiful golden deer appeared before them. Sita instantly fell in love and urged Rama and Lakshmana to catch the deer for her. Rama said that he would go after the deer alone while Lakshmana protected Sita, but Sita disagreed. She said that Rama would have the best chance of catching the deer if Lakshmana accompanied him. This way they would catch the deer, and they would accomplish the task quicker than if one of them went alone so that they could hurry back to protect Sita again. After a lot of begging from Sita, Rama finally agreed. Lakshmana and Rama made way for the golden deer.

Meanwhile, Ravana hid where he could not be seen. After Rama and Lakshmana were out of sight he made his way toward Sita. Jatayu, a powerful bird the roamed the skies, had happened to be observing the situation that was taking place. He did not dare to challenge Ravana to battle because he knew that would end in his defeat. Instead, he flew as fast as he could to catch up with Rama and Lakshmana. He warned them that an evil and powerful rakshasha named Ravana was kidnapping Sita. He told them that he was a relative of the demons they had defeated earlier.

Rama did not know if he could trust Jatayu. He quickly shot a non-lethal arrow at the deer. The deer instantly transformed into Maricha. Rama believed Jatuyu’s story now. He instructed Lakshmana to defeat the injured rakshasha while he saved Sita. Rama jumped on Jatuyu’s back and made way for Ravana.

Rama and Jatayu finally found Ravana flying in his chariot in the sky. Rama demanded that Ravana return his wife. Ravana rejected Rama’s command and after that an intense battle followed. Each party exchanged blows but seemed to be evenly matched. Rama then decided to attack Ravana’s chariot instead of Ravana. He sent a shot at Ravana to bait him. As Ravana dodged the arrow, Rama intercepted his chariot’s motion with a barrage of arrows. The chariot was damaged and began to spiral out of control. Rama and Jatayu quickly pursued it and saved Sita. Ravana crashed to the ground with the chariot.

Jatayu descended to the ground. Rama and Sita were happy that they were reunited. Soon after, Lakshmana joined the family with news that Maricha had been defeated. Ravana then slowly crawled out of the chariot with several severe injuries. Rama told Ravan that he should have never attempted such a cruel act. He then shot Ravana with a barrage of arrows to ensure his death.

Here is an image of the comic book that gave me the idea for this story:

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Author’s Note:

I wanted the Ramyana to have an alternate ending. In the original story, Ravana successfully kidnaps Sita and takes her back to Lanka. In the process Jatuya is defeated after he attempts to save her. When Rama and Lakshman return, they have to seek information of Sita’s whereabouts. In my story I use Jatayu as a messenger to tell Rama that he is being tricked. Rama then catches up with Ravana just in time, and defeats him in battle.

Title: Rama

Year: 1970

Author: Amar Chitra Katha

Reading Diary B: Rama

For this week’s second reading diary I decided to read another version of the Ramayana. The comic book I read was called “Rama.” This book offers the Ramayana from Rama’s perspective. I noticed subtle differences from the PDE version. One of them is when Shurpanakha falls in love with Rama. Lakshmana and Rama joke around with her and make her angry. She then reveals her true form and Lakshmana cuts of her ears and nose. She runs to her cousins for help. She returns with Kara, Dooshana, and an army. I did not remember the army coming to attack in the PDE Ramayana. A part of the story that would be cool to rewrite would be the part where Sita gets captured. What if Jatayu warned Rama that when he was chasing the dear that it was a plot to capture Sita. Then Rama could kill the deer, and go back to protect Sita.

Here is an image of the comic book I read:

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Title: Rama

Year: 1970

Author: Amar Chitra Katha

Reading Diary A: Ravana Humbled

For this week’s Reading Diary I decided to read another comic book about Ravana. I read “Ravana Humbled” by Amar Chitra Katha. This comic book explores the more devout side of Ravana. He was a pious worshipper of the God Shiva. In one episode, he was trapped under a mountain by Shiva because he disturbed a conversation of Shiva’s. He then proved his love of Shiva and secured a boon and some celestial weaponry. In another episode Ravana was defeated by Arjuna. They got into a confrontation because Arjuna disrupted Ravana’s worship of Shiva. Ravana is later freed by Arjuna after his grandfather Pulastya begs him. I think a cool rewrite would be where Shiva grants Ravana a boon while he is captured and Ravana defeats Arjuna.

Here is an image of the comic book I read:

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Title: Ravana Humbled

Year: 1984

Author: Amar Chitra Katha