Rama, Sita, and Lakshmana roamed the lands of India after
being exiled from King Dasharatha’s kingdom. They had just finished a quarrel
in which they had to defeat the demons Khara, and Dooshana. Shurpanka, Khara
and Dooshana’s cousin, had escaped from the battle and retreated to the Kingdom
of Lanka where she hoped to receive aid from her brother Ravana.
Shurpanaka begged Ravana to defeat Rama and Lakshmana in
battle after they had injured her in battle. At first he disagreed because he
did not want to involve himself with his sister’s drama. Shurpanaka then told
Ravana about Rama’s beautiful wife Sita. Ravana grew more interested and
finally decided to help Shurpanaka get revenge on Rama and Lakshmana.
Ravana devised a plan in which he would attempt to steal
Sita away from Rama. He tells his uncle Maricha about the situation, and
Maricha decides to help him. Ravana’s plan was to have Maricha shape shift into
a beautiful golden deer. Sita would be so in love with the deer that she would
send Rama and Lakshmana after it. Ravana would then swoop in to steal Sita
away.
A couple weeks passed and the plan was set in motion. Rama,
Lakshmana, and Sita were all taking a rest from travel. They all sat down and
ate some fruit that they picked off nearby trees. All of a sudden a beautiful
golden deer appeared before them. Sita instantly fell in love and urged Rama
and Lakshmana to catch the deer for her. Rama said that he would go after the
deer alone while Lakshmana protected Sita, but Sita disagreed. She said that
Rama would have the best chance of catching the deer if Lakshmana accompanied
him. This way they would catch the deer, and they would accomplish the task
quicker than if one of them went alone so that they could hurry back to protect
Sita again. After a lot of begging from Sita, Rama finally agreed. Lakshmana
and Rama made way for the golden deer.
Meanwhile, Ravana hid where he could not be seen. After Rama
and Lakshmana were out of sight he made his way toward Sita. Jatayu, a powerful
bird the roamed the skies, had happened to be observing the situation that was
taking place. He did not dare to challenge Ravana to battle because he knew
that would end in his defeat. Instead, he flew as fast as he could to catch up
with Rama and Lakshmana. He warned them that an evil and powerful rakshasha
named Ravana was kidnapping Sita. He told them that he was a relative of the
demons they had defeated earlier.
Rama did not know if he could trust Jatayu. He quickly shot
a non-lethal arrow at the deer. The deer instantly transformed into Maricha.
Rama believed Jatuyu’s story now. He instructed Lakshmana to defeat the injured
rakshasha while he saved Sita. Rama jumped on Jatuyu’s back and made way for
Ravana.
Rama and Jatayu finally found Ravana flying in his chariot in
the sky. Rama demanded that Ravana return his wife. Ravana rejected Rama’s
command and after that an intense battle followed. Each party exchanged blows
but seemed to be evenly matched. Rama then decided to attack Ravana’s chariot
instead of Ravana. He sent a shot at Ravana to bait him. As Ravana dodged the
arrow, Rama intercepted his chariot’s motion with a barrage of arrows. The
chariot was damaged and began to spiral out of control. Rama and Jatayu quickly
pursued it and saved Sita. Ravana crashed to the ground with the chariot.
Jatayu descended to the ground. Rama and Sita were happy
that they were reunited. Soon after, Lakshmana joined the family with news that
Maricha had been defeated. Ravana then slowly crawled out of the chariot with
several severe injuries. Rama told Ravan that he should have never attempted
such a cruel act. He then shot Ravana with a barrage of arrows to ensure his
death.
Here is an image of the comic book that gave me the idea for
this story:
Author’s Note:
I wanted the Ramyana to have an alternate ending. In the
original story, Ravana successfully kidnaps Sita and takes her back to Lanka.
In the process Jatuya is defeated after he attempts to save her. When Rama and
Lakshman return, they have to seek information of Sita’s whereabouts. In my
story I use Jatayu as a messenger to tell Rama that he is being tricked. Rama
then catches up with Ravana just in time, and defeats him in battle.
Title: Rama
Year: 1970
Author: Amar Chitra Katha
Hey Akash! Your story was pretty cool. There are so many ways that the sita could been rescued before ravana escaped. One thing i thought about when reading story was about hanuman. When he went to the palace he could of easily rescued sita and just left. Anyways i thought your grammar was great your story was an easy read.
ReplyDeleteHello Akash! I really enjoyed your alternative ending to the Ramayana! This is probably my most favorite epic we have read this semester! This story is truly diverse and you could have taken it multiple different ways. Overall you did a very wonder job with your storytelling post. I look forward to reading your other stories in the future!
ReplyDeleteHi Akash! Great job with this story, I loved reading it. The Ramayana was honestly my favorite story I've read in this class, and I loved the story of Rama and Sita. I also wrote a story earlier in the semester based on this section of the epic, and it ended up being one of my favorite stories I've written so far! You did Great job keeping to the same plot, but adding in your own little twists.
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